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As much as I love Rhiannon, when she sings it live and says "Will you ever win? Wellllllll... I don't think you do!", that is a change of tense and it really isn't particularly good writing. But holy crap! Does it ever sound good! Listened to Rhiannon from the Rosebud Film and Live at the House of Blues in 1994 tonight. Nearly had a stoke they were both so good!
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"Can you write this for me?"
He says "No, you write your songs yourself" That made me stronger It made me hold on to me from That Made Me Stronger "What's faster then a fast car A beating heart" from Cheaper then Free "Well, this is the first thing That I've written Since I wrote about freedom" from Desert Angel "Well, I talked to my famous friend last night My third day up...well, his second nighter" from Two Kinds Of Love "Do not enter inside this circle This man is sleeping" from Stay Away "They say your life is wild Compared to what lifestyle?" from Love Is Like A River "A Charles Dickens character With your top hat and your scarf When you pull me through the rainbow I thought you'd stop" from Street Angel |
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^^^ Thanks for posting these welcomechris - they're hilarious
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Stevie is not the most intelligent writer, but she is a very emotionally vested writer. Her songs are like children to her; children who belong in the special needs classes.
I've learned to gloss over the inexplicable change of tenses, awkward phrases, odd or pedestrian word choices, over reliance on iterations, incomprehensible and oblique references, etc. I still find enjoyment in her music, including her most questionable songs and lyrics, especially if I don't analyze them too much. I think one of her issues is her ego. Because she has so much conviction in what she writes, she doesn't edit herself; everything is too precious. And while I believe she has an artistic intelligence, I can't expect her to be cohesive writer. Just listen to the disjointed way in which she speaks; it's the same way she writes. Rock music gives writers an allowance to twist and mangle language/syntax to a certain extent. Stevie, without even realizing it, takes full liberty of that allowance. There is no one like Stevie, and this is one of the many reasons why. To counter this thread, perhaps we should start a thread on lyrics, verses and phrases that highlight her brightest lyrical moments.
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Actually many critics consider that to be a great line.
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Yeah. How in the hell is an artist with multiple platinum albums a "flash in the pan"?
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I always liked that line too, from "Paper Doll," because basically its a one line indictment of how fickle the public can be. It's akin to the Eagle's line "There's a new kid in town".
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I've found this thread baffling because most of the quoted lyrics actually aren't bad or embarrassing, and some of them are actually very good! It's confusing to me to see Nicks fans posting that seem to think everything she writes is trite.
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But let's take Lindsey's criticism of the verses in "Thrown Down". The first verse is third person, the second verse shifts to first person. It doesn't throw me off at all, because the effect (to me) is that Nicks basically steps closer to the listener and gets more personal in the second verse. In the first verse she's observing from a distance - "this happened, that happened", in the second verse she's confronting Lindsey directly. It would actually have detracted from the song to put all the verses in the same tense - Nicks' artistry comes through on it. |
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