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Old 04-26-2009, 01:50 AM
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Thumbs up Brand New Song I Wrote Today While Doing Laundry- Lyrics Posted Here!!

So, I had this line and melody pop into my head- so I had to write it down. Nothing is set in stone, but here are the lyrics I wrote. Feel free to comment!!! It's a very lighthearted and fun song, so the lyrics aren't melodiously mystic on this one! I'll post one that is in a day or so.

Shania Written: 4-25-09

Verse:
Standing together, are you headed upstairs?
To go together- nothing special to share.
It's funny how your eyes can close in velvet lining.
And how the gracious views are no longer shining.

Chorus:
Well you can talk to Shania,
She'll let you know what you did wrong.
Well you can talk to Shania.
She'll tell you why I wrote this song.
She sees the things in me that you could never see.
And you can go play Mariah, while I talk with Shania.

Verse:
You stand beside her as though you can never lose.
The tragedy strikes with what's right in front of you.
Those were the lips of hers that I could never touch.
And I met someone new and got to know I missed out on much.
So take a chance and dance with Mariah,
And I'll leave her and walk with Shania.

Chorus

Bridge:
She took a chance- we slowly danced by crystal fire.
We got to know the deepest places of our minds.
And we waited by the sands of time.

Chorus with Fade


Alright- tada, there you have it. A very light song that I wrote while doing laundry. I got inspired because as I was exiting the elevator to do my laundry, I ran into that girl I used to care about (from Waffle House) and the guy who I do believe she likes- they were together, presumably going up to her room. So that's how the song starts off!

Anyway, hope you guys like it, and feel free to throw in comments and or constructive critisism, because it has not been recorded yet.

Much Love,
Ethan
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