Wrote for Stevie

ryguy2010 · #1 04-12-2011, 10:17 PM

Hello board. Well I wrote this poem for stevie. Please tell me if it is awful. Well I have obet 1000 poems and songs.

Own it
Her heart and all it encompasses, is scattered, torn
Like the pages of the great and clever poets,
Their marks are left aging and worn
We all have been there before
Some left a mark to keep record
Some didn't care about keeping score
Is satisfaction positional
Perhaps sitting juxtaposed
With whom will it sit next to
Nobody ever really knows
Hopefully it will not die in the abyss
Sealed and deliver thy heart
Just a kiss.. Just a kiss...

Gypsybecca · #2 04-13-2011, 12:18 AM

Well done! A beautiful poem. Have you given/sent it to Stevie? If not, you should.

StandbackStevie · #3 04-13-2011, 03:03 AM

really nice on the poem sounds great to me beautiful.

Musicman408 · #4 04-13-2011, 05:19 AM

This sounds great. It's always nice to hear of people getting inspired, myself included!

ryguy2010 · #5 04-13-2011, 07:24 PM

Thanks all of you for the kind words I have a beautiful gem that is 15 pages in length. As soon as I get a new pc where I don't have to copy and paste indiv letters I will post it.