Not Make Believe

[Dex]

Originally Posted by blinker12

I just wish she'd worked a little harder on the lyrics.

Yes. "Everywhere we go now, at home or at play" is far too clunky a line for use in the song's opening. It almost kills the song before it starts. I don't really mind the rest of the lyrics, although they certainly aren't anything near her best.

Sonically the song is just fantastic. I wish it had found a home that might've given it the wider audience it deserves.