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thank you so much! unfortunately, i'm pretty stuck here. found it's been hard writing about love if you've never had a boyfriend....
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here's one that i did for school..its a found poem that i made from Night by Elie Wiesel its called Shattered Alters but i made it a little different by adding lines that aren't in the book (guess its not a found poem then) Why do you wear the yellow star? I don't know. It's not lethal... Of what then did you die? Why did i live? I don't know. In a world frought with peril the joy in his eyes, gone... He no longer sang. They refused to listen. Why didn't they listen? I don't know. He walks with his eyes cast down, avoiding people's gaze. Why do you pray? Why do I pray? Strange question... I don't know. Oh God, master of the universe, in you infinite compassion have mercy on us. Why did he do nothing? Does he not love us too? I don't know. The alter was shattered. The wall coverings shredded. the walls themselves bare. What happened here? I don't know.
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.....I was gonna just keep lurking around here for a while and not post, but I absolutely cannot resist this thread. My blog, for anyone who is interested: http://danidennis.blogspot.com
Some recent stuff (no idea why they both end with "hour", but hey...): _________________________________________________ My Eleventh Hour I caught my own breath in my hands and took the time to breathe it back in-- sweet and satisfied, stale and strangled, spangled with lavender and sour milk and what it means to be nationless. Tell me you smell something different. Tell me I'm bound to what I give but never to what I am given; that I can choose when the balloon pops, when my corpse falls earthbound; that the rushed and eager touches I collect under my bed can be quilted into a sickening new height of love. I can't remember who told me that I wasn't young anymore. It might've been the stout cashier woman who proclaimed me a thief when I slid a Snickers bar into my pocket. It might've been my Playboy Mommy: she warned me of the sins in my blood, of her own obsession with a woman's power to unveil. Or maybe God told me on the day when he made me suddenly wretchedly unequivocally alone. On this ancient earth, I'm rarely glad to seem young-- until I'm tangled in sheets and limbs I can't get out of, until the simplest mechanisms of a beating heart lose their intrigue in my stoic desperation for blood. Tell me you smell something different on my breath; Tell me I can choose to be boundless. _________________________________________________ Witching Hour In September, he found his witching hour, while the rest of the house was asleep and I was the only one left to switch out the records for him— To sing “teenage wasteland” with him, to top off his rum for him, to light his cigars. In September, it was cool outside but his body stayed warm. I sat in the cold with him, rocked in the wind with him, my eyes following the furious sway of his body with him. But he wasn’t furious with me. Baba o’Riley excited my father. “Doesn’t this get your blood going, honey? “Don’t you just need to hit something?” I watched him dance with it, the heavyweight bag flying seamlessly between his fists. I watched him with frozen veins, with all the need in the world to sit still, to never hit anything like he could. He took his last swaggered punch and I jumped to break his fall— clinging to hands that know my blood all too well; haunted by a breath that once kissed me goodnight. |
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So I wrote this a few weeks ago and I don't really like it.... but I think its something a little different from me so whatever, I can post it.
Untitled I broke my wrists and broke my spine and the entire time that I lay in that bed I wondered how I’d bend— I wondered if I could melt the lines off the clock, or the ones on my face that I saw in a familiar nightmare. I wondered if I could still write with my tongue if my mouth became dry and my hands became numb. I wondered if I ever had anything worth writing about at all. Or if the fire in my veins and in- between my legs would surpass the time I don’t really have, if the moments of truth that I keep in my breast pocket were all that true at all. I wondered if love beat tirelessly when the gentle beat of the world was gone, if the seconds that turned into hours that turned into days were really as wasted as I once thought. I wondered if I’ll miss what it feels like to rock a baby to sleep while I am falling asleep in the arms of my own baby, if the systematic sway of the numbers and figures that carry our world would carry me to the world beyond this. I wondered if this world is so great after all, if beauty can breathe in its own precious life, if I can outlive all of these moments of wondering where to begin. |
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Beautiful, just beautiful.
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I'm glad I'm inspiring you to write some lovely poetry on my Facebook wall, David.
To everyone else: thank you. But seriously, you guys flatter me... the frustrating thing about art is that I don't know if it's ever possible to be satisfied! |
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Beethoven was often dissatisfied, especially with his early compositions; but was also often very satisfied, as he was with his Missa Solemnis.
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Seconded. You've a gift, Dani. Don't stop writing, yeah?
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This is beautiful, I can't even believe you don't like it ! You really have a gift, but I think you already know that, right? Makes me want to write. Thank you.
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As a side, I posted Jim Morrison's "The WASP" a while back, which often garners very mixed reactions (unsurprisingly). Would you ever consider doing a poem as erratic as that? (Oh, and I'm glad to have found a Poe fan on this thread! I'll get right onto those stories you suggested - and "The Raven", for that matter!)
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I'm actually going to start doing some really experimental stuff within my writing. I'm starting to bore myself so I need to get creative! |
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TUSK!
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