How much of a cop-out is it...

[GODDESS6]

Originally Posted by Miss Vicky

I tried that... but still got nothing.

Here's the last paragraph; any thoughts?

He saw his hand reach out again, saw it pushing open still another door. Exposing for his bloodshot eyes the sight of a nude form, resting silent and nearly motionless atop black sheets. The skin of this form was dark and stretched across a muscular frame that, even in repose, emitted an ominous air of masculinity. Still Jordan felt nothing. He eased his own slender frame beside Primo and there he lie awake. His body still cold, still shivering. His mind blank, numb with exhaustion.

god that is gorgeous, i wanna read all of it!!!~ & i love "Jordan"...that is my brothers name~ well done miss vicky~