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Originally Posted by DauphineMarie

She even felt guilty, about even dying.

I love that line.. To me, though grammatically incoherent, it emphasizes a point.

"She even felt guilty about dying" - Boring

"She even felt guilty.. about even dying" Less correct, less boring.

I agree. I've tried singing it a few times without the 2nd "even" and it doesn't sound right at all.

Originally Posted by vivfox

One time in high school(1970's) I quoted some Stevie stuff she said in an interview back then and the teacher said what I wrote made no sense.

oh well, teachers aren't always right