Can you tell me what it is about exactly.. or better what you wrote it about?
I wrote something about a long deep friendship beeing over,..My english is not that good as the most of your poems, sometimes i wish i had more words to describe in english. But i ll keep learning.
All in all this is a try to describe my feelings about what was or is happening...
Summer is back,
in every way,
brightest light,
i know you ll stay
My darkness went with you,
away,
I ve let you go,
it hurts to say.
You leave a whole inside my heart,
always a place,
inside my art.
But its much too late,
to get back those times,
thats the sad reason,
i am writing these lines.
I miss you now,
i ll miss yoou when,
the sun shines so very bright again.
I cant keep you on this way,
long time friend,
you lost your play.
I was your friend for years and years,
we even shared the deepest fears,
cried and cried so many tears.
I feel now,
it is time to let you go.
You lost yourself,
i see it in your eyes.
And then i know
too many lies.
The times i remember so long ago,
it was so much fun.
Oh no.
But now its tme to say goodbye,
why did this time come,
tell me why ?
One day i might understand.
But its another route i ve planned,
lies dont fit in there by now.
Get it!
Its time to let me go!
Thought i would mean much more,
but you are just a shadow,
of someone very dear,
the person that i used to know.
You ve let go my hand,
i saw you fading faster,
the i stood alone,
black,
in this disaster .
That moment i had realized,
the sprakling light has left your eyes.
A memory i try to hold,
remind me of those times,
colors orange, green and gold,
time for us to divine.
I miss who u used to be,
but it is the trhuth i see.
And now i know i will say goodbye,
this has ben my very last try.