
10-18-2010, 02:22 PM
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Addicted Ledgie
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Join Date: Jun 2009
Location: Monte Sereno, CA
Posts: 4,028
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Quote:
Originally Posted by ButterCookie
First pop at a sonnet.
So as I stop to tie my shoe,
The rain does fall upon my back.
I look up to the swing which I outgrew,
and then glance to mine own name carved upon a weathered plaque.
The wind whips my florals about my knees,
The tired old swing creaks and groans.
Whilst Mr. Wind whistles to a gentle breeze,
Yet still he rattles through my aching bones.
As I press on, my skin cracks,
My lips blister.
and I think of my kingdom and that which it lacks,
My mind wrought in a deep, gray twister.
I wish for a bed under the stars, on which Mr. Wind can steal my woes,
calmness upon me, he bestows.
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Well it's not really in sonnet form BUT I really like it anyway. Haha.
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