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Old 01-13-2010, 02:54 AM
michelej1 michelej1 is offline
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[QUOTE=Nikolaj;865140 And I definitely prefer the first, sparse version, with the spaces left unfilled in the 'remembers how good it can be', 'remembers a melody' segment(s).[/QUOTE]

Oh, that's another line I love. She switches a pronoun the second time she says it, from "she" to "he" and it just gives me the impression of both of them remembering, appreciating and missing the exact same things, but maybe at different stages in their lives. Beautiful.

Michele
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