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Old 01-27-2008, 04:33 PM
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Miss Vicky, you've changed my life.

Thank you.

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Originally Posted by Miss Vicky View Post
It's lose. Loose is the opposite of tight.
The phrase at the end of the first sentence should read with whom I'm in love; ending a sentence with a preposition is grammatically incorrect.
Those commas should either be semicolons or periods.
I believe the word you're looking for in that last sentence is employer.

Unless you plan to pursue a field where proper use of the English language does not matter, please keep in mind that your self-proclaimed maturity and charisma will only get you so far. Being well spoken and well educated is probably more important than those other attributes. Also, keep in mind that so-called charisma can be perceived as cockiness and lead to resentment by those you expect to employ and by those in the position to promote you to such a level.
So says the Veterinary technician.

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