Quote:
Originally Posted by LiamMcConville
I want to wait and actually loose it to a girl that I'm in love with.
I'm not supposed to care about what color my bedroom is, I'm not supposed to be in Leadership, I'm not supposed to care about the future.
It gets obnoxious, but I know that one day I'll be most of these people's employeer.
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It's
lose. L
oose is the opposite of tight.
The phrase at the end of the first sentence should read
with whom I'm in love; ending a sentence with a preposition is grammatically incorrect.
Those commas should either be semicolons or periods.
I believe the word you're looking for in that last sentence is
employer.
Unless you plan to pursue a field where proper use of the English language does not matter, please keep in mind that your self-proclaimed maturity and charisma will only get you so far. Being well spoken and well educated is probably more important than those other attributes. Also, keep in mind that so-called charisma can be perceived as cockiness and lead to resentment by those you expect to employ and by those in the position to promote you to such a level.