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sounds like you should find somewhere else to work!

as for the letter: cut it into thirds and delete two of them. i stopped reading after five minutes and was nowhere near the end. i assume the recipient is a busy person and may not take the time to actually read about your valid concerns if presented in such a lengthy format.

if i were you, i would mail off a letter requesting a meeting to discuss ongoing problems at work and keep the details to a minimum - only stressing the importance of scheduling a meeting. at that meeting, i would focus on current issues. something that happened last year should have been addressed last year. and any information heard through a third party could very well be flawed and make you look like a gossip. JMO.