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Originally Posted by Jyqm
I don't get it...
I enjoyed your poem! Well, maybe "enjoyed" isn't the right word... But I like poems that thrust that kind of vivid, violent imagery into a seemingly totally banal situation.
"The Darkling Thrush" is almost devastating a century later, isn't it? You had no idea, Tom... Not a clue...
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oh I was just poking fun at a few here who pick on me for being slightly (he he
slightly) nelly at times I guess...because I use Sun-Ripened Raspberry deodorant and drink Raspberry Ice water and keep my eyebrows in shape...lol
I appreciate what you said about my poem. It's about being in the car with my parents and wanting so bad to tell them something...it's like a conversation with myself I guess...I have a lot of poems that deal with the sexual abuse I experienced, go figure
oh and I meant to tell you how much I
enjoyed your poem...WOW, it's awesome...reminds me of A Rose for Emily. Very nice.