Hi Becky
I'll post my thoughts on SS later,being lazy right now, but up in the first verse you have:
Your shining over ocean crashing
and it should be
Your shining autumn...ocean crashing
For a long time I thought she was saying "shining armour...ocean crashing"
I think this will be a good one to interp. though
~KiKi
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~*~Don't listen to her,
listen through her~*~