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Old 01-14-2014, 05:10 PM
RockawayBlind RockawayBlind is offline
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Originally Posted by Johnny Stew View Post
I actually think the line sounds better with the incorrect grammar. "I should have turn around and run as fast I could," just lands with a thud. Try singing it along.
It's not a pretty line, for sure. I would have just killed the line altogether and come up with something different. Unfortunately, Stevie seems to refuse to edit herself a lot of times, and that is to the detriment of the art, in my opinion.
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