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Originally Posted by fairydust75
Your hands held mine......so few hours....
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Not an opening line but indeed very beautiful. Not a natural way of structuring the sentence but the best way to achieve the right effect.
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Originally Posted by PenguinHead
Listen to the wind on the water
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I forgot about this one, for me
Tango in the Night doesn't quite come together but I think Lindsey pulls off a lot of very evocative imagery, reminds me of a later Fitzgerald novel.
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Originally Posted by shackin'up
Countin' on my fingers / Countin' on my toes / Slippin' thru your fingers / Watchin' how it grows.
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Very quirky, although I could never tell if my favorite part of this opening was the words or the manic weird-ass chords.
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Originally Posted by Ulpian
"There's no use in crying, it's all over"
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