Musicman408
11-25-2006, 08:17 AM
So this is the last song I wrote, and really it is a super song in length. I thought I would post it because I saw a thread on 7 wonders that was talking about how most of Stevie's songs are really long and have to get cut back, so immediately I though of this baby. Feel free to tell me what you think about it.:nod: Good or bad.
Verse 1: I'm not going to lie anymore.
There are things that need to be said.
Words that I need to tell you face to face.
About feelings that are common place.
I don't know how you'll react,
or if you'll even care,
but seeing you pass by me,
is just too much to bare.
Chorus: I really care about you.
Though you probably can't see.
Something inside me makes me believe,
If you give me a chance,
certainly you'd see,
that I could shine for you.
It's all I want to do.
Verse 2: So I'll openly admit,
I'm shy on the surface.
Nervous to say the wrong thing.... wrong time.
I had always wondered if you'd be mine.
Now that I think of it, I'm so sick of time.
I see you move from person to person.
Never giving me a chance.
I try to be bold in my stance,
but you move right past me.
Chorus
Verse 3 If you think this is about you,
you're too foolish to see.
Through it all, I'm only being me.
I write in disguise, mystery and mayhem.
Nobody ever knows what I'm trying to say.
So why, now, am I changing me ways?
I'm not, I just thought for once you should know.
I'm talking straight to you, and there's nothing you can do.
You're close to one, then another and another.
The one now really doesn't care for you.
And yet you insist on staying the course.
You won't leave his side, no matter how hard I try.
In the middle of the room, I'd still hear from you.
But you never gave me a moment in time.
Chorus
Verse 4: So by now, you're probably out there thinking,
This is about me, this is about me.
Oh, but you see, I will never tell.
For even though I'd do anything to be by your side,
I suppose deep down,
it could never be.
I could tell you in person how I feel,
but only to be rejected.
That only means more heartache for me.
And I've had too much heartache in that sense.
So I keep it all inside.
And I write. Oh yes, I write about you.
Chorus
Verse 5: Since I don't wnat anymore heartache,
I write. I express all the words,
that I can't say.
I write in a way so you can't understand,
how much I really want to be your man.
And I'm sure I'll have plenty of questions,
but it's alright baby,
I'm doing the best that I can.
So now, back to you.
It has been many months,
yet I have gotten nowhere.
I've seen you with others, too tough to bare.
I sit at home and think about,
all of the things that I couldn't say to you.
If you could look inside my mind and heart,
you;d probably break down and cry,
because everything I do is for you.
Everything I write is about you.
Chorus
Verse 6: So by now, you might be feeling something.
Some sort of remorse, some sort of regret.
All I can say is this is intense.
I feel so good when I can vent.
And have people reading what I write,
and thing :he's so right".
I'm told by many that I'm "cute, nice sweet",
and yet I always manage to get beat.
It it's for reasons I can't help,
that's the reason my heart melts.
I know I could offer you more than anyone,
and yet some how no emotion forms for you.
What will you saw when I see you again?
Wil you go back to the red velvet mornings,
and the nice little thins you used to say to me?
I guess I'll have to wait and see.
Chorus
Verse 7: I love to write,
and make people forget time.
What's even better is when they try to gigure out,
what it is I'm trying to say.
It's like I'm playing a game.
I write, you read and then wonder.
Never before have I taken such time,
to create a world of rhythm and rhyme.
Again, its all for you,
and I'm a fool, what can I do.
I really only am a fool for you.
Do you feel this now?
Oh yes, do you feel this now?
Chorus
Verse 8: I've gone too long without someone,
and I don't wanna wait anymore.
I thought he was my friend,
but now he's making you break my heart.
Soon, you'll be together,
by choice or not,
but regardless too much time will be spent
with you two together, and I'm afraid
he'll feel the spark,
its enough to break my heart.
So I'm saying one last good-bye.
Even though this flame won't die.
I know deep down I tried, yet you couldn't see.
And even though I say good-bye my door is always open.
And when you come knocking on my front door,
you'll come calling me home.
Chorus
Vamp: So what will happen with you?
What is it that you're gonna do?
I can't help but say oh well.
I've opened up with everything now.
There's nothing left to hide,
and yet tomorrow when I walk out the door,
all you'll say is good-bye.
But now I understand, you could never love me.
It is just too easy to see.
So how does it feel to have a song about you?
Does it make you want to cry,
for the calmest reasons why?
Oh I'll never know. Oh I'll never know.
Yes I'll never know. I care for you, but it's through.
I care for you but and it's true. Oh yes I do.
So I have posted this song, as well as many others, on my myspace page and have encouraged my friends to read it which is a lot because the subject of ALL of the songs posted is one of my friends and she is in my top 8 and all of that. And I think she has no idea that they are about her. In fact I don't even know if she has read them, but that is her loss.
Hope you all have a great weekend,
:nod:
Much Love,
Ethan
Verse 1: I'm not going to lie anymore.
There are things that need to be said.
Words that I need to tell you face to face.
About feelings that are common place.
I don't know how you'll react,
or if you'll even care,
but seeing you pass by me,
is just too much to bare.
Chorus: I really care about you.
Though you probably can't see.
Something inside me makes me believe,
If you give me a chance,
certainly you'd see,
that I could shine for you.
It's all I want to do.
Verse 2: So I'll openly admit,
I'm shy on the surface.
Nervous to say the wrong thing.... wrong time.
I had always wondered if you'd be mine.
Now that I think of it, I'm so sick of time.
I see you move from person to person.
Never giving me a chance.
I try to be bold in my stance,
but you move right past me.
Chorus
Verse 3 If you think this is about you,
you're too foolish to see.
Through it all, I'm only being me.
I write in disguise, mystery and mayhem.
Nobody ever knows what I'm trying to say.
So why, now, am I changing me ways?
I'm not, I just thought for once you should know.
I'm talking straight to you, and there's nothing you can do.
You're close to one, then another and another.
The one now really doesn't care for you.
And yet you insist on staying the course.
You won't leave his side, no matter how hard I try.
In the middle of the room, I'd still hear from you.
But you never gave me a moment in time.
Chorus
Verse 4: So by now, you're probably out there thinking,
This is about me, this is about me.
Oh, but you see, I will never tell.
For even though I'd do anything to be by your side,
I suppose deep down,
it could never be.
I could tell you in person how I feel,
but only to be rejected.
That only means more heartache for me.
And I've had too much heartache in that sense.
So I keep it all inside.
And I write. Oh yes, I write about you.
Chorus
Verse 5: Since I don't wnat anymore heartache,
I write. I express all the words,
that I can't say.
I write in a way so you can't understand,
how much I really want to be your man.
And I'm sure I'll have plenty of questions,
but it's alright baby,
I'm doing the best that I can.
So now, back to you.
It has been many months,
yet I have gotten nowhere.
I've seen you with others, too tough to bare.
I sit at home and think about,
all of the things that I couldn't say to you.
If you could look inside my mind and heart,
you;d probably break down and cry,
because everything I do is for you.
Everything I write is about you.
Chorus
Verse 6: So by now, you might be feeling something.
Some sort of remorse, some sort of regret.
All I can say is this is intense.
I feel so good when I can vent.
And have people reading what I write,
and thing :he's so right".
I'm told by many that I'm "cute, nice sweet",
and yet I always manage to get beat.
It it's for reasons I can't help,
that's the reason my heart melts.
I know I could offer you more than anyone,
and yet some how no emotion forms for you.
What will you saw when I see you again?
Wil you go back to the red velvet mornings,
and the nice little thins you used to say to me?
I guess I'll have to wait and see.
Chorus
Verse 7: I love to write,
and make people forget time.
What's even better is when they try to gigure out,
what it is I'm trying to say.
It's like I'm playing a game.
I write, you read and then wonder.
Never before have I taken such time,
to create a world of rhythm and rhyme.
Again, its all for you,
and I'm a fool, what can I do.
I really only am a fool for you.
Do you feel this now?
Oh yes, do you feel this now?
Chorus
Verse 8: I've gone too long without someone,
and I don't wanna wait anymore.
I thought he was my friend,
but now he's making you break my heart.
Soon, you'll be together,
by choice or not,
but regardless too much time will be spent
with you two together, and I'm afraid
he'll feel the spark,
its enough to break my heart.
So I'm saying one last good-bye.
Even though this flame won't die.
I know deep down I tried, yet you couldn't see.
And even though I say good-bye my door is always open.
And when you come knocking on my front door,
you'll come calling me home.
Chorus
Vamp: So what will happen with you?
What is it that you're gonna do?
I can't help but say oh well.
I've opened up with everything now.
There's nothing left to hide,
and yet tomorrow when I walk out the door,
all you'll say is good-bye.
But now I understand, you could never love me.
It is just too easy to see.
So how does it feel to have a song about you?
Does it make you want to cry,
for the calmest reasons why?
Oh I'll never know. Oh I'll never know.
Yes I'll never know. I care for you, but it's through.
I care for you but and it's true. Oh yes I do.
So I have posted this song, as well as many others, on my myspace page and have encouraged my friends to read it which is a lot because the subject of ALL of the songs posted is one of my friends and she is in my top 8 and all of that. And I think she has no idea that they are about her. In fact I don't even know if she has read them, but that is her loss.
Hope you all have a great weekend,
:nod:
Much Love,
Ethan