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Pounding paws crack our fragile roof.
These paws should be familiar, yet they live and work too close to hoof. You and I, we are the bleeding end of a rich man's bet. They'll sell our bones, Char our flesh, Thrive off our pained moans and Display us, hanging. Dripping. Fresh. Don't make a sound, Clasp your china through my iron claws. Pretend that with gold thread you are bound, tight and fragile. Fight your urge to banish the demon hounds of hell and middle class. Neither you or I, little one, can distinguish between the masters and their whipped... hollowed... effigies... mutts. They'll strip our dignity then strip our fur, our beauty. Wear our integrity as trimming. Bloodthirsty cruelty. |
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"You and I, we are the bleeding end of a rich man's bet."
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Hey guys, I need your help. A few of the schools I applied to in the UK want a portfolio of my writing. They are asking for six poems. I'm going to post a few favorites on here.... what six would you choose? The choices need to convey different elements of my writing. If you only have the time/energy to read a few, tell me if you'd include the ones you read or not-- I know it's not reasonable to assume anyone will read all this!
The Lover of a Ghost I’m the lover of a ghost swallowed by Arachne’s famished aspirations, by her beguiling professions, her ever-soft asphyxiation her sweet gossamer grip, the shackles seeking love requited. I have heard his faded testimony, I have seen him take the choke. I fell upon him with my midnight veil, and in the center stood my eye— waxing, approaching full bleeding out my soul’s conviction. And in my lightness shone his chains— his spider’s art, her labyrinth web and spoke the moon to a dying man, “I promise to help you live.” He begged for me to wane, he pushed me through the velvet night. He almost loved Arachne’s bites and chains, sweet throbs of fruitless guarantee. Yet I’m the lover of a ghost who spins his own web of indecision, I’m the lover of a man who can save anyone but himself. Forgotten, Awake I fell through the world and landed in a poorly lit dream, where androgynous shadows dared I sort them from the rest through my kaleidoscope eyes, with bated breath. This is where I found you, in a world where the negative spaces do the talking and all the figures with no mouths smirk in the dark— knowing I am blind behind vanity’s pleading eyes, knowing that the beauty had a youthful beast. This is where I found you and this is where you’ll stay, once I grow up, grow away from this self-loathing sin and begin to be forgotten, begin to fall awake. A Nautical Room Your sweet breath swells into mine, fills a sail softly undulating as if the winds of the world waned away. You blow heavy on my back when the sound of your discomfort fills the room; you slip into my sheets and watch them billow above us, giving half-satisfying direction towards a horizon lost. So we sail on, buck up, tie our shoes and wait while sea water slaps against the hardwood floor and the breathless coastal fog hovers above our bed. So we wait for the instant when I can make you better, wait for when ecstasy isn’t a curse, wait for the moment when you can finally love me, wait for the day I raise mast by myself. Untitled Prose Piece (I don't think I've ever posted this here) The moon swayed against her bare back every time the wind pushed with enough vigor to weave her body left. Its light hugged the swell of her breast, swiveled down her side unevenly. For a moment, she was fully exposed in the paleness. Then the wind would rise up again and the broken pendulum would shift left like before, swallowing her body in darkness. She eluded both the dark and the light, unable to balance herself on the grass below her naked form. So she swung back and forth, left to center, dodging the shadows for the light before involuntarily swinging back into the black again. She was used to this inconsistency; the artist in her could sense it from simple moments like this one. Everything became a metaphor once she acknowledged her thirst for one. She wanted to believe that her inability to stay still was somewhat uncontrollable, like the way the beads of a kaleidoscope fall with the slightest movement, like the wind that eased her sideways. So she spent a good part of her evenings on the grassy hill behind her house, rising and falling with each breath, swinging left to right inside of the evening's unpredictable beat. This is the woman I fell in love with. A woman who defined herself by the world surrounding her, a woman who eased her way into the universe as precisely and delicately as I eased my way into her mind, into her open body. This woman was poetry that flowed in the perfect places-- her hips melodically dipped into her waist and rose up again, billowing into the fullness of her chest. Her eyes were the punch line that killed, that broke the immaculate curvature I knew so well. Sometimes, I'd find myself lost in her softness, wrapped in the overwhelming effect of such subtlety. I'd watch her write in bed, following her lips and her hair and her spine and her fingers until she'd catch me staring and stare right back, breaking her general sense of tenderness with something staccato and poignant. Her eyes reminded me that she had meaning; she had a distinct and riveting pulse. She existed beyond me; she existed beyond herself. And then she fell in love with me in return. She let herself succumb to the warmth between us and melt, molding inside of my every breath. She abandoned each curve that she loved, slapped her arms lifelessly around my ribs, dropped the look in her eye that once kept me hungry. All of a sudden, her pulse walked in step with mine. I was lost—slithering away from her on a buttery track that she had kneaded with her own hands. Each touch became a more and more obsessive attempt for completion; she searched my body with her fingers, frantically seeking any trace of herself in my skin. And as she slept, in her only gentle moments free of desperation, I realized that she had cascaded into the most beautiful loss of self that I had ever seen. Last edited by daniellaaarisen; 03-30-2011 at 02:19 PM.. |
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Syncopation
I told you to put your head there on my chest as we lay in our bed. I wanted you to hear my heart beat and seamlessly float into its rhythm, our rhythm of delicate sways and boundless ease with no name and face and age, no latitude and longitude. I wanted your heart to not be alone for a while, to follow. As you sleep, I collect your snores and sighs in a jar under our bed. I swallow them like water, gulping you in until morning, when you insist to once again become plottable. We split, we multiply. Into all of our moments without one another, into all of our feigned strengths, embellished and worn, adding distinct recognition to each syllable of our names, differentiating. I climb into this bed— our bed— and watch the demarcation. I watch you lean into my body and consume the smell of my skin, I feel your palms stretch underneath me, their desperate hunger for completion. We have diverged and we have merged, monogamous in a moment, synonymous in an experience. I hate myself for loving how you love me whatever way you can. Invisible Blood I was never fully satisfied, chasing you on heels that weren’t yet broken, dodging the defenselessness you allowed me to feel like it was a bullet soaked in a plague. But this Achilles found her weakness when something in her ankles snapped and she surrendered to the ground apologetically. I clung to you in spite of myself, a tendril clasped for dear life around the stoic woman who found so much warmth to give when needed in another’s darkness. You work only by the moonlight, working only with your hands: silently, I watch you wrap your fingers around my limbs like an irrepressible vine, attend to my reservations like they belong to your own blood. Blood— an indelible tie of which we can never be fully conscious; the endless space we make in our womb where ends don’t ever have to meet. I’m on this earth to share the bonds that warm my aching body, here in skin and bones to watch all of these bones break, absorbing all the life you have to give so that I may one day give it back to you. Witching Hour In September, he found his witching hour, while the rest of the house was asleep and I was the only one left to switch out the records for him— To sing “teenage wasteland” with him, to top off his rum for him, to light his cigars. In September, it was cool outside but his body stayed warm. I sat in the cold with him, rocked in the wind with him, my eyes following the furious sway of his body with him. But he wasn’t furious with me. Baba o’Riley excited my father. “Doesn’t this get your blood going, honey? “Don’t you just need to hit something?” I watched him dance with it, the heavyweight bag flying seamlessly between his drunken fists. I watched him with frozen veins, with all the need in the world to sit still, to never hit anything like he could. He took his last swaggered punch and I jumped to break his fall— clinging to hands that know my blood all too well; haunted by a breath that once kissed me goodnight. My Eleventh Hour I caught my own breath in my hands and took the time to breathe it back in-- sweet and satisfied, stale and strangled, spangled with lavender and sour milk and what it means to be nationless. Tell me you smell something different. Tell me I'm bound to what I give but never to what I am given; that I can choose when the balloon pops, when my corpse falls earthbound; that the rushed and eager touches I collect under my bed can be quilted into a sickening new height of love. I can't remember who told me that I wasn't young anymore. It might've been the stout cashier woman who proclaimed me a thief when I slid a Snickers bar into my pocket. It might've been my Playboy Mommy: she warned me of the sins in my blood, of her own obsession with a woman's power to unveil. Or maybe God told me on the day when he made me suddenly wretchedly unequivocally alone. On this ancient earth, I'm rarely glad to seem young-- until I'm tangled in sheets and limbs I can't get out of, until the simplest mechanisms of a beating heart lose their intrigue in my stoic desperation for blood. Tell me you smell something different on my breath; Tell me I can choose to be boundless. Gold Dust It makes the pocketwatch far from My pocket Tick against my thigh At the type of speed My heartbeat misses. It's like The rain can't be wrong today If it's dropping gold for me From the hands of a man Birthed in foreign fields-- Expelled from a womb That still tells her wives' tales In terms of pasos and siestas. It's "adios" to that For the man Who now loans me the dollar So I forget how to nap-- Forget how to eat in a world Taking it too easy In a world That won't stop moving In a world Bound to a clock From some world That can't tell when time's up. I choose to roll in gold dust In a world Where I can't be golden. |
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Hey Dani,
It's a reasonable assumption with writing this good My choices are: Syncopation The Lover of a Ghost My Eleventh Hour Forgotten, Awake A Nautical Room Untitled Prose Piece I found it very hard to choose! I feel that the first four are your very best work and the last two really demonstrate the breadth of what you can do with words (not that I didn't thoroughly enjoy those too). Incidentally, I don't think I've read Forgotten, Awake before, and it just knocked me over. There's an incredible dense claustrophobia to it. (It reminded me very powerfully of the feelings in the scene in Snow White where she's running through the wood and it seems to be attacking her. I don't know if that makes sense! I haven't thought about it in years but there's the same oppressive fear and creative use of the dark about it.) You're dealing in shades of black but there's much more richness to it than just the tired old notions of shadows and dark figures. The negative spaces image is so striking. Your words are careful but not analytic or bloodless. Love it love it love it. Best of luck with your application! |
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Kathryn, I cannot thank you enough for your detailed and complimentary feedback. Seriously, I owe you one. Dinner when I come visit Dublin!
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Dani, this weekend I'll go through these and make my recommendations. Upon first glance though, they sound beautiful, just like you!
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New Song, "What Love Is"- Check it Out! |
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great stuff
Wow i read in here for like over an hour the last days.
Some of you have written amazing stuff. Even thou some parts are hard to understand , because i am german and dont know some word. Especially Danielle s poems, but its a good way to learn more vocabulary. There are alot of pretty inspiring poems around here I wanted to share some of my stuff Alone in the middle of nowhere, Could you take my Hand? There s some nightmare on that i stare. Can`t you be here ? help me thru the fear ! Theres no ground under my feet, i feel. Everything is fading so fast away. It doesnt seem real. A weird film behind my blind eyes. A scream that makes my ears def. I dont reach the higher hights. Its empty here, its empty there, And it seems as no one cares. I reach out for everyone around, Not the strong woman , I ve always shown. Just a little girl, living in her shadow world. Runs to the basement as fast as she can, holds the key, Oh ! she is shivering. Afraid of what is right behind Aware ! Lillith, dont be so blind! She opens the door as fast as she can, Closes even faster then. The key she found, turns twice around. A secure place , she might have found? Under the table, little women, she sits alone and cries. Shivers. Panic. Wet and scared. But then tehre s something that she heard. A melody so clear and bright, makes her feel „I ll win the fight“ Her breathe calms down, a voice around, a spark of hope, that she had found. The walls , they fade, so does the rest. „ has this been a cruel test?“ Now she wakes up, all alone. Its all right , she is at home... The next .... This time she was going to die, it wasnt even worth the try. She thought the end was near, saw an unfulfilled life disappear. She runs thou everything is lost, she still wants no matter what it costs. Bursted into tears, she herself disappears. Helpless in fears , burt into tears, that moment she woke up, she was lying in her bed , but it still turned `round in her head, afraid of life , afraid of death. No one knows. ist goes just the way it goes, suddenly her eyes lit up. She turnes around to look at the moon, suddenly , there was someone in her room. This is something i have written about some nightmares a while ago. |
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ok everybody. Just dismiss my typos if I have any. Most of you already know all of the letters on my keyboard are broken but wanted to add to this Amazing thread!
Manor Child. My child still swims around inside My child has yet to learn to glide Swimming in the upper terrace of fright It doesn't have to be darkness to search the light As my child swam down the stairs Nothing had changed just astonished glares If the currents enveloped all of my fears "he'd" soon drown inside those tears Swept away with such inundation My child rowed on without hesitation Perhaps my child would never surrender After all he was my defender |
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Can you tell me what it is about exactly.. or better what you wrote it about?
I wrote something about a long deep friendship beeing over,..My english is not that good as the most of your poems, sometimes i wish i had more words to describe in english. But i ll keep learning. All in all this is a try to describe my feelings about what was or is happening... Summer is back, in every way, brightest light, i know you ll stay My darkness went with you, away, I ve let you go, it hurts to say. You leave a whole inside my heart, always a place, inside my art. But its much too late, to get back those times, thats the sad reason, i am writing these lines. I miss you now, i ll miss yoou when, the sun shines so very bright again. I cant keep you on this way, long time friend, you lost your play. I was your friend for years and years, we even shared the deepest fears, cried and cried so many tears. I feel now, it is time to let you go. You lost yourself, i see it in your eyes. And then i know too many lies. The times i remember so long ago, it was so much fun. Oh no. But now its tme to say goodbye, why did this time come, tell me why ? One day i might understand. But its another route i ve planned, lies dont fit in there by now. Get it! Its time to let me go! Thought i would mean much more, but you are just a shadow, of someone very dear, the person that i used to know. You ve let go my hand, i saw you fading faster, the i stood alone, black, in this disaster . That moment i had realized, the sprakling light has left your eyes. A memory i try to hold, remind me of those times, colors orange, green and gold, time for us to divine. I miss who u used to be, but it is the trhuth i see. And now i know i will say goodbye, this has ben my very last try. Last edited by -Lillith-; 04-24-2011 at 01:04 PM.. |
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Still not loving this one but here goes...
Le Premier
in the iron, we are clad we were won by something mad that drinks fools empty. in the earth in the fire, in the wind, that sweet, sweet water we are still what we once were. in the moments that I find you, when I sink, dissolve inside you i am breathing for your name. but my wind it cannot reach inside the part of you that preaches false desire i can pick us up as ghosts who left their entrails in the hallway where i met you. i’ll show the heart of every haunting the beating of the drum pounds soft inside you. but when i crawl back in your bed, hold your head between my hands i’ll know i’m holding something less than the man who reached inside me grabbed my lungs and eyes to blind me and ripped my air straight from my chest. if you see me softly ringing the bell that sculpts each wasted second in your memory get on your knees, say your hail mary’s pray that i’ll still be here standing in the ruins of our love. that love erupted life inside me, built a fortress from thin air, put the poetry in the words that i once spoke, and as I stand here stone in stone weezing heart and broken bone i can’t help but think that you might be the one |
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I think you add an incredible melodic quality to it. You know, "the beating of the drums", "the wind", the bell ringing, and on and on. That, with a good melody, would make a great song. Oh, and, "Le premier", in french, is "the first", not "the one". But that's maybe what you meant to say.
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Anyway, for some reason, your poem reminded of a poem by a great french author, Guillaume Apollinaire (check him out if you can, seriously great). They have this melodic and lyrical quality in common (though the topic isn't the same...at all. he's talking about Dionysos and german mythology to describe his undying love for a german girl ) : "My glass is full of a wine trembling like a flame Listen to the slow song of a boat-man That tells he's seen under the moonlight Seven women with green hair till their feet Stand up ! Sing louder and dance So that i don't hear the boat-man song anymore And put near me the blond girls With motionless look and curly nats The Rhine The Rhine is drunk where the grapevines look at themselves All the nights gold reflects and stumbles in it The voice still sings to death Those fairies with green hair who celebrate the Summer My glass broke like a burst of laughter." Sounds way, way, way better in french, so you can actually take that as a compliment .
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Moon-tides
It was on this day that your Lord had made
that I reclaimed my tender mystery. My destiny shook beneath me, settled itself between each of your folds, shattering against the shore as a collective sigh, one wave. And to think you thought you were something without me. To think of a lover’s stroll along the coast without the clamoring voice that I gave you, of the angry release you inflict upon the earth until I strip your high tide away. I do it all with a whisper, what you attempt in Triton’s scream. To dance our waltz you chase the curvature of my hip, navigate each intricate step through desperate fingers in my hair. You take pride in this slavery, swell with joy as the corners of my mouth soften, a smile to break the barrier between earth and sky – my permission that molds us to one. So with clasped hands, intertwined, with the hunger of fiends – your sea foam illumed by my Luna’s light, my moon, ever brighter, because it’s touched you. But be wary, my seamen, when the smile fades, when the moon woman wanes, retreats to her sky. Be wary when I fade for your new stillness will haunt you, left alone to your devices, nothing in my wake. |
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