"Blue Letter"... my 1st short film

[mylittledemon]

Originally Posted by vivfox

OK, now who hangs their towel over the shower curtain while they are taking a shower? The thing would be drenched when you go to dry yourself off.

I do.

[mylittledemon]

Originally Posted by BTFLCHLD

brandon, this is your first production, right? I like it. It might have been cool to have some tear smudge Lily's name so ink spread blue on the letter...eh, whatevs. anyways, for future films, I would make a small suggestion to shorten the length of credits - one minute is a 1/3 of your video and that is wayyyyyy over for a short film.

Yeah my profs said the same thing... but then they never specified the length of what the credits should be. I realize I could've sped them up a bit more. The credits were really more for the sake of the class involved in making it. Good feedback though.

[Lindsfan]

Originally Posted by vivfox

OK, now who hangs their towel over the shower curtain while they are taking a shower? The thing would be drenched when you go to dry yourself off.

I do...my whole family does

Brandon, your film is cool. Nicely done! Death after the credits was creepy, but I liked it! My 12 yo is into making short videos for youtube, so I really dig seeing others' work as well ( yours is obviously much more advanced than my son's... )
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[vivfox]

Originally Posted by mylittledemon

I do.

In the words of Abigail Folger: I give up. Take Me!