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This sounds like something Stevie could have written. Me likes it.
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THAT IS THE ULTIMATE COMPLIMENT OF COMPLIMENTS! Thank you Viv
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I've been writing a lot lately.
Anyway, here's a song. Or a poem. That has a melody. Whichever. So the moon becomes a sunrise, Like the wind, I fly away. Another night erased with passing light, They're all the same. Still I see your smiling faces, But all my eyes can lend are tears. What happened to the time we wasted? A liftetime's passed us by in these four years. So goodbye my friends, Or so we'll call each other. One day they say we'll meet again But until then, we begin over... A warm embrace makes me remember The touches of the ones I love, And come this time next September, It's you I'll be thinking of. When the truth is hard to weather, Though we may be miles apart, I'll think of music made together, And melodies forever in my heart. So goodbye my friends, Or so we'll call each other. One day they say we'll meet again But until then, we begin over. We begin over We begin over Over and over again We begin They say you're only hurting yourself... No, you're hurting everyone else... You're only hurting yourself.... You're only hurting yourself... Edit to say: Dani, you're an incredible writer. Color me jealous.
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I wrote this on the 5 year anniversary of my father's death and sent it to my brother and sister...
COUNT ON ME When did 'maybe one day' become today? And here we all are going our separate ways But I love you both more than my words can say Looking back brings tears to my eyes, it's amazing Silly games and sidewalk chalk Those were the best summer days weren't they? Hey my sister, I love you Hey my brother, I need you Hey, I always miss you And I know you miss me too You can count on me when the weight of the world is too heavy How can I be more clear listen to the words as I sing them here Don't care if we're oceans apart, I see you every time I look into my heart You can count on me Can you believe we've made it this far With wounds still like new even as old as they are Standing strong even when the light goes dark Took a lot of wrong turns to make it all right Up against the wall we won't go down without a fight Proud to say we are our father's children alright Hey my sister, I love you Hey my brother, I need you Hey, I always miss you And I know you miss me too You can count on me when the weight of the world is too heavy How can I be more clear listen to the words as I sing them here Don't care if we're oceans apart I see you every time I look into my heart You can count on me You can count on me brother You can count on me sister You can count on me ©Ponyboy-Productions
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We got to write poems in English during the semester this year so this is one of the first 'legit' poems I've really ever written so it's nothing mind blowing or anything
Life can be free and easy For me it’s far from done I am like the wind, rolling freely My dreams have just begun Joy makes the heart ring Love can make you this way It can make a heart sing Day after day after day Once the sun sets on our time and our colored strands turn grey We can again be alive The gates of heaven await us today Angels will sing Our souls will be freed Angels will sing Our souls will be freed~
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No poems, but...
I have filled up 3 journals as of late and I am working on the 4th - been writing alot lately. Been encouraged to write matter of fact...
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Wow, I just discovered this thread! Love it I'll take a closer look at it when it's not quarter to four in the morning...but here are a couple of my pieces if anyone would like to read them!
Untitled You, the reason I am free— Your CDs stacked, disorganized have never told me any lies. Verity suspended in the air as smoke from the latest cigarette (a Merit Ultra-lite) wanders into the shallow night. I have grown in knowing you, as you have shown your flaws to me because the dark can be only lies told to shield my virgin eyes and because you looked at me like I never knew— But how could I forget? Your eyes have always been so blue and I’m the only one to see them now. So tell me what I cannot know in that cloud of smoke you blow because the night is long enough, and I love you more than dawn. So I write this for you, as we stumble into smokeless light. What the Night Says There you go again, loving the light-- too bad it fades from view each night like a storyteller who has died, the tears spring back to your eyes. They feed me, quench my thirst and without them I’d have no life, no sorrow teased from your days, your tender heart, your tender ways. This circle game of pleasure I play forcing you to surrender the armor of day, for only I have seen you in beauty, your mind a jewel fallen astray From the pommel of the sword you treasure, the one object by which you’re measured, the object that is always dark to me, the gleaming one I’ll never see. So go on, keep loving the light until you too have lost all sight of what matters, unclothed by grace of the unyielding night. Here is a song-like poem, and I have a melody in mind: Driving into Night So I go driving, driving into the night half out of anger, half out of fright. Searching for the answer that I just won’t find when you could come back just about any time. No, I won’t find it here, racing into the dark ‘Neath raindrops like mirrors— mirrors into your heart. ‘Cause you left for the clouds, left me behind, and I can’t get you out of Out of my mind. It’s been so hard to see what lies beyond each streetlight, but so easy to feel when I’m caught in your sight. So I drive past the park, flooded past where it’s safe— Safe for people to walk, for you and me to talk. I could drive into that river, never to return. Try to swim ‘till I drown, but then I’d never learn. Learn all you can teach, learn all I can give, learn those bitter lessons that show me how to live. So I simply stand by as things come undone, ‘cause I know we’ll stay— we’re the lonely ones. And you look back to your home, back to all of before, to the laughter at night, to the open door. I know they’ll always remain on our minds, but you and me lately, we’re two of a kind. So as I keep driving, driving home from tonight, I realize maybe just us could turn out alright.
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This thread is GREAT, I love writing and you are all very good at it!
Blueletter, I loved so much your "Untitled" poem. Call me crazy, but it reminds me of Chris and this is another reason why I love it. Thank you very much for sharing it with us
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Here's my experiment in serial criticism on Oliver Stone's experiment in New Media advertising for his upcoming film Savages:
Stone Images - Part 1 http://cityarts.info/2012/06/21/stone-images/ Stone Images - Part 2: Nothing Personal http://cityarts.info/2012/06/26/stone-images-part-2/ Stone Images - Part 3: Natural Born Capitalists http://cityarts.info/2012/06/28/stone-images-part-3/ Stay tuned for Parts 4 & 5...
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Aw, thanks!!
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