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Originally Posted by daniellaaarisen
PLEASE give me feedback on this. I'm sure you guys don't like every single word of this thing so if there's ANYTHING you would change, let me know. I literally just finished this five minutes ago so it hasn't gone through any editing phases.
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I want to howl—
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Is it my imagination or is this a nod to you-know-what by you-know-who?
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Originally Posted by daniellaaarisen
Hahahahaha, I was debating whether or not I should use "carve" or "chisel." I wasn't sure.... I definitely didn't want the parenthesis in the poem.
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Oh. LOL!
I personally would pick "chisel." Takes longer - - - More excruciating - - - More uhm . . . thought involved, if 'ya see what I mean. Kind of a "dark" interpretation but . . . well, it implies that the one doing the "chiselling" is paying attention, in spades - 'ya see what I mean? But also - - - when one is "chiseling," one is creating a work or art - - - one which may or may not be appreciated. "Carving" is more wholesale, i.m.o. Doesn't take as much effort or attention.