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Old 02-06-2019, 01:14 AM
bombaysaffires bombaysaffires is offline
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some good lines, but the payoff as you wait for her to explain what are these two kinds of love comes down to "one for the way you walk, one for the way you love me"

and the "I talked to my famous friend last night" is a bit rich.

"He says how do you do what you do, how do you let the world in?" seems also a bit exaggerated...if anyone lived in a rock star bubble, out of reality, it was Stevie, especially during that time.
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