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Originally Posted by Dex
Yes. "Everywhere we go now, at home or at play" is far too clunky a line for use in the song's opening. It almost kills the song before it starts. I don't really mind the rest of the lyrics, although they certainly aren't anything near her best.
Sonically the song is just fantastic. I wish it had found a home that might've given it the wider audience it deserves.
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Not Make Believe is a song I sing around the house quite a bit haha
I tend to sing the opening lines as "It isn't just that we cause each other such pain/Everywhere we go now, at home or on stage" - does still sound a little clunky though.
I agree that the lyrics are definitely not her best, though I love the line "It hurts my self esteem...it hurts my everything".