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Originally Posted by jaycee
Ooh, goodie! Another piece from Dani! 
Yeah, this is pretty awesome...  However, I'm confused by the second paragraph - shouldn't that read as "...a written metaphor"? Otherwise you wouldn't find any explanations, right? The second part of that paragraph also seems contradictory - if you've already carved out the lines from your face, how can a second person then carve them away?
 I'll admit that I've never been that good at interpreting poetry, so it may just be me.  Nonetheless I love all of your poetry!
Btw, whatever happened to all the fighting over you? Did everyone else give up? If so, we're together now, I guess...  |
I just posted an updated version of the poem... I did a lot of editing today. I think it addressed everything you mentioned but I'm not sure! I'll read over it again and see.
I guess the fighting did stop! But seriously... flattering...